1) Shot of shower at beginning, raise diegetic sound of water running, don't start soundtrack until shot of Louisa and Hammad.2) Longer dissolve from about 0.25 to 0.283) Raise sound of scream at end and cut soundtrack at 1.27 and just have sound of scream.Well done but you need the revisions I've mentioned above.
1) Shot of shower at beginning, raise diegetic sound of water running, don't start soundtrack until shot of Louisa and Hammad.
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3) Raise sound of scream at end and cut soundtrack at 1.27 and just have sound of scream.
Well done but you need the revisions I've mentioned above.