Order of events:
1. Louisa and Hammad walk down the road back home from supermarket.
2. Tilly walks through front door, hangs up coat, and turns on shower.
3. Louisa and Hammad approach steps to front door.
4. Tilly sits on her bed, pulls back covers to find Fin dead and covered in blood.
5. Tilly screams as Louisa and Hammad open front door.
6. The 3 characters look at each other in horror.
Intertextual References:
The opening to Heavenly Creatures is an intertextual reference from the way the two characters scream for help, in the same way, so does Tilly.
Another possible intertextual reference we will use is from Once Upon a Time in America, where Eve pulls back the covers from a bed.
Edit - 26/02/2016
Order of events:
1. Louisa and Hammad walk down the road back home from supermarket.
2. Tilly walks through front door, hangs up coat, and turns on shower.
3. Tilly sits on her bed, pulls back covers to find Fin dead and covered in blood.
4. Louisa and Hammad approach steps to front door.
5. Tilly screams as Louisa and Hammad open front door.
6. The 3 characters look at each other in horror.
You need to emphasise that your thriller is a realistic contemporary British thriller about ordinary young people who experience an extra ordinary event.
ReplyDeleteWell done for referencing "Once Upon a Time in America".