You have satisfactorily compared the use of the voice over, the representation of gender and the differences in camera movements in both texts. Well done for referencing examples,
Next step:
1) When constructing an analysis it good practice to add to your analysis embedded screen shots/visual examples as evidence. This strengthens analysis and makes it more interesting, whilst also reflecting your technical expertise.
2) Endeavour to develop your analysis.
Effectively organised and presented Fin and your analysis is promising.
You have satisfactorily compared the use of the voice over, the representation of gender and the differences in camera movements in both texts. Well done for referencing examples,
ReplyDeleteNext step:
1) When constructing an analysis it good practice to add to your analysis embedded screen shots/visual examples as evidence. This strengthens analysis and makes it more interesting, whilst also reflecting your technical expertise.
2) Endeavour to develop your analysis.
Effectively organised and presented Fin and your analysis is promising.